First off, I know I’ve been raving about English Companion Ning a lot, but I just want to say thanks to Diane for mentioning the Teaching Texts group on that ning. I had not noticed that group before, but what a useful opportunity. After reading Diane’s blog I immediately joined the group and made a post asking for help with One Flew Over A Cuckoo’s Nest, the book I have chosen to plan my unit around. Within the hour I received a response from a teacher who directed me to the personal website she created to teach this novel. Awesome!! The best part of this was that when I looked at some of the things she has done with the novel, I realized that some of my own ideas are not completely off the wall.
In my last post I mentioned some of my experiences with college student writing in Kalliope, and I was glad to see that Rae could corroborate my claim that the writing is often not on the level one might expect. Jason asked for some more specific examples. I am hesitant to put passages of the stories into my blog because they are anonymous submissions and I would hate to unintentionally offend a classmate (although I am sure that as English Ed majors we have all honed our writering skills), but I can elaborate on the things I see. Tense and agreement issues, misspellings and grammatical errors, overuse of adjectives and misuse of vocabulary. Sometimes it seems as though a writer has heavily relied on the “synonyms” function in Word to try to elevate his or her vocabulary without actually paying attention to context and meaning. As I say this, I fully realize that I make these mistakes all the time. However, over the years I have become very careful about my writing, and I try to be diligent with my editing – I wish that everyone would do this. Actually just today one of my professors, who has written several books and refers to himself as a professional writer, told our class that usually when he writes his first couple of drafts are crap, and it is not until he has gone through a tedious revision process that he is able to create high-quality material. Everyone makes mistakes at first, what matters is taking the time to go back and fix them.
I’ve been reading the chapters in Wilhelm’s “You Gotta Be The Book” this evening, and I am interested to discuss these chapters tomorrow, because I am currently a little confused. When he is discussing using cut-outs in SRIs, I’m picture the students doing puppet plays with magazine clippings and tortillas and I’m not convinced (as well as really hoping) that this is not what is actually going on. I guess I need a little clarification. However, I do think the idea of thinking about how you read, rather than just what you are reading, is an interesting one. I can’t say I’ve ever really thought about how I read before, but next time I sit down with a book (probably the Aeneid as soon as I finish this blog post) I’m going to try it.